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Honeycomb and Berries (Dr. Quinn poem)
by Lisa Anderson (Age: 18)
copyright 02-05-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
I’ve never felt more starved
Than I feel at the moment.
My hunger is a throbbing force
That pulsates throughout my body.

I am deprived of nourishment:
Vitamins, minerals, fresh water.
My body is craving these things
And all I can do is wait.

At last, my nourishment has arrived!
You are here, and you bring me honey
And berries. This is a fine, elegant meal
But the only thing my body needs is you.

Based upon the Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman series


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03-06-2007 Sam Hackel-Butt    

I've only ever heard of Dr. Quinn Medicine Woman, so I can't really comment on how well it connects to your theme, but it is a very pretty poem, very sweet (Well it has to with all those honey, and berries!) I could find no errors, though the flow seems weird. Maybe because of the syllable count? I'd suggest to maybe find words that would fit easier. Other than this, beautiful poem!

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