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Smothering in the Violence of Lost Hopes and Unending Tradgedies
by Chessie Hodge (Age: 18)
copyright 05-08-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Smiling faces,
Dead hearts,
Fake intentions,
Falling apart...

"I can't breathe,"
She screamed,
"I can't breathe,"
She was alone...

Crawling forward,
Tears kept streaming,
So cold and gray,
She kept bleeding...

Writhing in the dark,
She hardly felt alive,
Writhing in the dark,
She was alone...

The living are dead,
And the world is on fire,
Twisting the knife,
Stained hands for hire...

"They keep talking,"
She whispered, her eyes so wide,
"It just won't stop,"
She was alone...

Toxic waste spewing forth,
Mouths overflowing,
Arrogance showing,
They will take her soul...

Broken reflections,
The mirror shattered,
Broken reflections,
She was alone...

Imbruing the slate of time,
The icy engravement of sheer pain,
Unnecessary actions have altered the course of too many lives,
Empty promises filled the room with bloody rose petals...


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06-26-2008 Brooke M.    

omg! I loved this, its going on my favorites list! Had this deep terror wrapped in the words with images of a horrific world of fear and pain. I could picture everything so well. Loved it. Really creepy and chilling. Wonderful work!!!!
06-10-2007 Brittney N. N.    

I love this poem. It has a very nice flow to it, the repetition is just right, it doesn't sound more like a story rather a poem. I think it's excellent. Very deep as well. Good work. *Thumbs up.*
~Brittney~
05-21-2007 Sam Hackel-Butt    

Hmm...
I'm torn between LOVING this piece, and thinking it's just alright. I do like the imagery this piece gave, and I like the repetition, but I wonder if repeating she's alone quite often is a good thing? That's the one thing I kept stumbling over. One other thing I want to knit-pick on, is the final stanza ^-^; I love, love, love it. I really do. Buuut, it doesn't fit. If you decide not to edit it out, no complaints here, but I felt I had to point it out, heh.

-Sam
Of the CC

P.S. I decided after writing this comment, that I love this poem ^-^
05-10-2007 Wayne Thomas    

After several readings I'm not sure if I really get the point except what seems to be hypocrisy and broken hearts. Anyway, the poem is a great one for chanting at poetry readings--if you've never been to one, go, they can be fun. One thing for sure, you're always interesting. Keep it up. Wayne
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