The Owl
by
Brent Richard J.
(Age: 12)
copyright 03-30-2007
Age Rating: 7 to 127
The sun a blare,
I am asleep,
But I don't care,
Fire goes down in defeat.
~~~~~~~
I open my eyes,
Jolt for a rat,
But rat denies,
I got him and sat,
No more of the rat's demise.
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Interesting. It's like you were in the owl's head. It seemed a little off here and there like you just wrote something down, but still good. You still have more time to make more poems. Use it. I'd like to read more. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
Wow, I wish I could write like you when I was 11. (which was only 2 years ago heheh). It's a very short poem, but very good and interesting also. Great work!