06-03-2007
Megan Cox
Whew! Reached the one-hundredth hit! That's what I've wanted. I mean, for people to read my poems. Thank you, all of you who read my poems! Oh, and I will be making a JunJun poem soon. Really soon.
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04-12-2007
Denise Fairgrieve
This is very insightful about her character on the show. Though it doesn't rhyme, it still holds power.
Good job.
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04-09-2007
Alma Hulbert
This was really cute, really about her persinality. Meh is right, a little short, but ir shows what she's like and now people know. I didn't see anything wrong. I like the part where she talks about creating chaos even if she is cheerful. It's the quiet ones that always get you. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
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04-09-2007
Renaate Butruchuka
Sad, that I haven't seen Palla Palla yet... but I definitely will do it soon... It's just that I haven't gone so far in watching SM. Palla Palla seems to be really attractive and full of energy. As I understand it, she's a villain, well that doesn't disturb me from gaining some of her qualities... Nice work!
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04-07-2007
Chessie Hodge
This is so great! It definitely describes Palla Palla well. It was short, sweet, and straight to the point. I really hope that you write about the rest of the girls! Your poem about Palla Palla reminds me of something Bob Ross (the painter on PBS) always says! "We don't make mistakes, we just have happy little accidents!"
Keep writing! I'll be reading.
Chessie
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04-03-2007
Mehrina Butt
^-^ That was adorable! I love the last three lines; "Oops. I messed up another brilliant plot. Oh well! Now I'll just be cheerful!" What a classic! And it perfectly describes the playful nature of Palla Palla. A bit on the short side, but still quite an enchanting write. Great job!
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