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 10-01-2007 Frank Fields
And because if I'd read it closely enough, first time around, I wouldn't have to be trying to rate this where it should be.
Frank :)
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10-01-2007 Frank Fields
I had to go back, making sure I had read each one of your works. I didn't read this one enough times, or deeply enough. Kind of sort of, yes, but not enough to see the mystery of those first four lines. You have blue eyes. Like the sky. You are also not understood by many people because your eyes seem as if they can look into their souls. Maybe some people are uncomfortable because of that, but you know those attitudes to be petty spites and that you have a higher calling to offer. Your ability or talent to be able to take away a person's bad things and through your eyes, which are ready to fight and beat the demons troubling someone, can, because of their calmness, instill that calm in them and take away their confusion, maybe even hurt. Like I said in my earlier comments, the idea or thought of a shaman is still there, but now that I've studied your poem really carefully, I can tie things together that I didn't first time around.
I'm glad you didn't edit those lines and, as I mentioned somewhere else, "to thine ownself were true."
Frank :)
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07-16-2007 Emily Garwood
first of all...what a title thats what caught my attention lol just thought well look at that and decided i just had to read it. This is a really interesting poem, and what a description for eyes...makes it seem like you have deep blue eyes have you ever seen the adverts for contact lenses with colour that give you really amazing blue eyes....kinda like that i guess anyways a very good description i loved it you can just imagine everything dripping away thinking about it keep it up
Emy
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04-13-2007 Chris A.
Gorgeous. Just gorgeous. I wish i could write like you do!
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03-24-2007 Richard Reed Jr
I'm sort of' confused by the first four lines myself.
The words of the poem were well chosen and well arranged.
The words are beautiful and very moving.
I'm very impressed.
Rich
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