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Sailor Moon Comets
Dissapearing Children! The Three Lights Come to Town
by Raycel M. (Age: 13)
copyright 03-30-2007


Age Rating: 13 to 127

  Sailor Moon Comets
Picture Credits:

A woman with red hair and black eyes frowned at the hollogram in front of her. It showed a woman with gray odangoes and a white dress with a cresent moon on the hem, holding and baby with blonde hair in the same style, the baby was wrapped in a alabaster colored towel, goo-goo and ga-ga was all the baby said to the woman, who crowed and cuddled the baby affectionatly. The woman's eye's narrow as she see's a man walk into a room in the hollogram. He had short brunette hair and wore red armor, hanging from his side was a sheath. A long, slender sword was in it.

The man walked to the woman holding the baby. "What's her name?"

"Her name is Serenity, my dear." said Princess Serenity's mother.

"You are naming her after you, Queen Serenity?" askes the man.

"Of course," says Queen Serenity, "after all, Serenity is a nice name."

The man wraps his arms around Queen Serenity and whispers into her ear, "a name like Serenity means good fortune, my wife--"

The red haired woman screams and the hollogram falters.

"IDIOT!!" she screams, "What a STUPITD IDIOT!! Betraying me, and choosing Serenity as his soul mate!" the woman storms away from the hollogram, she stops at a piller. She clenches her fist and rams it into the pillar, it topples over.

"No one..." the woman hisses, "cheats on me and gets away with it!!"

~*~

21st century...

Serena grumbled. She heaved her back-pack off of the sidewalk.

"Stupid Homework." Serena mumbled, "the only thing that stands between be and video games is Homework. Can things get any more worse?"

Serena dragged her back-pack and knocked on the door to her house, Mrs. Tusinko opened the door. She looked at Serena's poor posture and laughed.

Serena clenched her hands into fists and pouted, "it's not funny mom!" she cried. Mrs. Tusinko was to busy laughing to notice the remark. Serena stomped away from her mother and flung her back pack into the kitchen, a shreik erupts.

"Luna!" Serena exclaimed, running into the kitchen and pulling the back-pack off of the black cat, who was rubbing her cresent moon.

"What do you got in there, bricks??" Luna hissed, pivoting her head to Serena, who gave and akward look.

"It's books." Serena whimpered, "I'm so sorry! Please forgive-"

"Who are you talking to?" asked Mr. Tusinko, looking up from his news paper. It occured to Serena that he had been sitting at the table while she was begging for Luna to forgive her. Caught by surprise, Serena tumbled backward.

"N-no one, Papa!" Serena stuttered, the words twisting on her toungue.

Mrs. Tusinko walked into the room, whiping tears from her eyes. Something caught her eye.

"Dear, did you see this?" she asked Mr. Tusinko.

"I did." he said, pointing at an article, Luna jumps onto the table and takes a look.

OVER THIRTY-FIVE CHILDREN DISSAPEARED TODAY! the title screamed, WHERE HAVE THEY GONE??

Serena walked over and peered over Mr. Tusinko's shoulder, but something else caught her eye.

"EEEEK! The Three Lights are back in town!" she squealed, Luna toppled over the table, from embarassment and because Serena's shrill voice hurt her ears.

*Oh...* Luna thought, *sometimes. I wish that she didn't always stray from her Sailor Scout duties...*

An Hour later...give or take ten minuets...

Serena raced to the stadium, from what she heard, the Three Lights were preforming there. Serena shoved her hand into her back pocket to check if her concert ticket was still there. Serena sighed with relief when she felt pasty paper.

When she got to the stadium, she could hear excited girls, Serena rushed to get the the back of the line before someone else did. When she did so, someone tapped her back, Serena turned to see Amy standing there.

Amy smiled, and said jokingly: "No cutting in line!"

Serena cackled.

~*~

Serena and Amy sat down next to eachother after an hour of waiting.

"When did you get you're ticket?" asked Serena.

"I got it last week." Amy said.

"HUH-??"

Amy put her hand on Serena's mouth when the lights dimmed, "shush! It's starting."

Serena watched the stage intently, music filled the stadium, fog covered the stage, The Three Lights appeared from veiw, girls screamed as The Three Lights started to sing.

Serena was swept away in day-dreaming as she listened to the The Three Light's Song. Serena swept her eyes on the stage, Seiya turned, and for a moment, Serena swore that Seiya was searching for her in the crowd.

Amy pushed Serena's shoulder.

"Serena!" she cried. Serena jolted out of her daze. Amy rolled her eyes, "where were you?"

"Cloud Nine." Serena replied. Amy shook her head and turned away.

~*~

After about three hours, the concert was over. Serena and Amy where among the last girls to exit the stadium, and they were surprised to find mothers screaming frantically, they were pleading to the police officers, some where demanding where their girls went.

Serena cocked her head, "what's that all about?" she asked Amy, who shrugged, "I don't know. But did you see the news?" she asked Serena, "Over eighty-eight children dissapeared this month."

"Oh, really?" asked Serena, "I didn't know that."

"Well, then, you should know that Seiya's looking for you," Amy said abruptly, turning Serena's head to the left, Seiya was sneaking toward them, apperantly wanting to avoid his millions of fans.

"Nice seeing you again, Odango." he said, a gleam entering his eye.

"You to, Seiya." said Serena, but she was alert so that she wouldn't let her guard down. Seiya looked over Serena's sholder, she felt someone yank at her hair, she let out a loud: "YIPE!" and whirled around, Darien, Serena's boyfreind, was laughing along with Amy.

"Darien! You scared me!" Serena cried, she wrapped her arm around Darien and said: "Seiya, this is my boy friend, Darien."

Darien looked at Seiya with surprise, "you know Seiya Lights?" he demanded to Serena, who nodded. She looked over at Seiya and realized that he was glaring and Darien.

None the less, Seiya held out his hand in a freindly greeting, "Hello." Seiya said patiently, Darien grasped his hand with Seiya's and shook it.

"Look! THERE'S SEIYA!" a scream erupted, Seiya turned to see a crowd of girls rocketing toward them.

"See you later!" He cried, taking off and the girls running close to his tail.

Darien snickered, "you think that he got used to this by now?" he asked Serena, who giggled.

~*~

On the way home...

Serena made her way down a dark, gloomy street, she looked nervously from side to side, after what she heard, she didn't want to get kidnappped.

Serena heard a rustle, she jumped, "w-who's there?" she questioned to the darkness, no one answered, "h-hello...?"

Another rustle, Serena screamed as something lunged at her. Serena continued to scream until she realized that it was Luna.

"Where have you been??" she demaned Serena, who gotten back to her feet.

"We were looking all over for you!" Raye cried, who had come with the rest of the girls, which included: Mina, Lita, Amy, and even Hotaru and Rini, who had come back from the future and looked like they were sixteen.

"What? What is it?" asked Serena.

"We decided to check out the stadium to see why there are so many dissapeareances." said Mina.

"So lets go!" Lita said.

~*~

At the stadium...

Eternal Sailor Moon tip-toed around the stadium, if they were caught, they would get in serious trouble, even though they were popular throught Tokyo.

Sailor Moon tripped and toppled over.

"Be careful." Luna said.

"Clumsy." Super Sailor Chibi Moon taunted. Sailor Moon immediatly got up and yanked one of Chibi Moon's pink bunny shaped odangoes, which was now easy because she had long hair. Chibi Moon cried out, she whirled around and pulled at Sailor Moon's bangs.

"Ow!" she screamed.

"Now is not the time to quarrel." said Sailor Saturn, whopping both of them with the other end of her Silence Glaive.

"Ouch..." Chibi Moon muttered, rubbing her head.

"Shh...I heard something..." Sailor Mars said. There was a crack, and two police officers jumped from the celing and landed infront of the sailor scouts, who screamed.

Right before the girls eyes, the police officers transformed into huge spiders, both twice the size of Sailor Jupiter, they both were blood red with black symbols.

"Yuck!" Sailor Jupiter squealed, "I hate spiders! Jupiter Oak Evolution!"

She got the first spider, who screamed and burst into bits. The second spider spit out a huge black volume of poison at Sailor Moon.

Sailor Venus and Saturn jumped in front of her.

"Venus love and beauty shock!" Venus cried, a long chain of hearts forming in her hands. Venus whipped out at the volume and it dissoved.

"Silence Glaive Surprise!" Saturn joined, a large ball of light forming at the top of her Silence Glaive, it struck out at the spider, it skittered out of the way.

"Mars Flame Sniper!" Mars did her best to aim carefully, but out of desperation was the spider able to move so fast.

Out of the blue, Tuxedo Mask burst into veiw.

"Tuxedo the Smoking Bomber!" he said, the spider leaped out of the way, he hopped to walls and tackled Tuxedo Mask, who cried out.

"Tuxedo Mask!" Sailor Moon cried, rushing to him.

"Star Serious Laser." A voice bellowed out of the darkness, the spider screamed as it was struck from behind and burst.

Three women jumped from the roof and landed in front of the Sailor Scouts.

"Healer, Maker, Fighter!" Sailor Mercury said.

"Sailor Star Healer, Sailor Star Maker, and Sailor Star Fighter are here." said Maker.

Tuxedo stood, Sailor Moon behind him, "thank you." he said.

"Well, we had no choice." Fighter said, "we are also on the dissapearing children's case."

"That's good, we have extra help!" said Luna cheerfuly.

"But we warn you," said Healer, "you better be carful. Spies are everywhere, and they are likely to swoop down and pick you up."

"Don't worry, we will be careful." said Sailor Moon, but although nobody knew it, somebody watched them, with anger and hatred in her eyes.


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05-03-2007 Leigh G.    

*nods approvingly* Simply amazing! Such an improvement! Total randomness: if Serena was playing Final Fantasy X, Final Fantasy VII: Dirge of Cerberus or any other Final Fantasy excluding XII, I can see why she wanted to get playing. :D I've collectively played FFX for 1,000 hours in two years. -.-

This is such a huge improvement from your last book! Hmmm, I always wondered the deal with Serena's father, it was never explained in the series, was it? Then again, I only read the StarS manga (yes, in the manga the s is capitalized) so there may be a few things I get confused about. Like, Galxia is killed in the manga. She's purified in the anime, I think. Hmm, only a few capitalization picks on my part, and I suggest you only use one exclamation point, for more is improper grammar. Furthermore, "?!" and "!?" is also improper grammar even though it hardly bothers me. About the Sailor Stars, wasn't it Sailor Star Maker, Sailor Star Healer, and Sailor Star Fighter? Or did they decide which sex they wanted to be and became knights? -.-

I was hoping Darien would have a cabbage-based attack! Go to the books workshop, down to "~*Darien's Diary: Days In The Life of An Idiot*~" by Jenna T and find out about the cabbage...and why I cannot read one sentence involving him without waiting for him to talk about cabbage. XD Jenna T has changed the view of many involving Darien...:D

I shall say it one more time, this is an amazing improvement! Randomizing: aren't most concerts about two hours? The few I've been to have been around that long... Anyway! E-mail me when you post more, okay? Great work, keep it coming!


05-02-2007 Mehrina B.    

This is nothing short of hilarious!!!

"What do you got in there, bricks??"

I have vowed never to use "LOL" but I'm tempted to do so right here. Your story is genius!! I don't just mean the wit and humor you wrote this with, but also how you wrote it.

A lot of stories are *so* incredibly, well, horribly written, even though they have a good plot. You know, "She said, he said, they said," and capitals all over the place. Your story, however, is written extremely well! Your sentences are very well formed; lots of adjectives, and intelligent conversation! Plus, I like how you portray each character's personality, especially Serena's! Well, she is one of a kind, neh? All that sugar...

You have a really great story; it has an enormous amount of potential. Please, continue this, and be sure to e-mail me when you do so!

The only bad thing about this is the spelling and grammar. As a grammar/spelling-maniac, I'm notoriously picky about editing. If you wish, I can send an edit through e-mail, even right now. I'm always eager to help!

Great story!

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04-08-2007 Christina Johnson    

I love this story.
It's the best by far I think that by far.
Why? First. I think for two reasons because of the way that it was explained. And because of the past and how it was told. And not also how Serena to deal with real life like homework and being a sailor scout and how she had to with her boyfriend Darien. I think that this is a real true story.


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