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05-30-2007
Frank Fields
This write was edited to remove a word, "to" that had been repeated twice, accidentally. Nothing else was changed.
Frank ;)
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04-15-2007
Riona Evers
Very fairytale-like. Dragons are marvelous creatures, indeed. I love the way how you intetionally spelled Magick. I believe that is Old English? If not, it still seems to be medieval, perfect for poems like this. Mr. Fields, you give the impression that you mastered the way to use imagery, for you wove it so well into this poem.
Another great piece, Bravo!
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04-09-2007
BJ Niktabe
This brings back vivid memories of pictures in my mind while I read fantasy stories about dragons and princesses, fairies and ogres. I went through a phase when it was my favorite kind of story to read.
The imagery and flow of this piece is wonderful. I look forward to reading more from you!
This is one of my dabbles in fantasy, named "Fantasy" of course!:
http://www.prose-n-poetry.com/display_work/18363
BJ
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04-09-2007
Alma Hulbert
Wow, This really good. I liked how not every sentence end just so it could be on that line. I have a bad habit of doning that with my poems, I have to the words just right so I can have a comma or period. To me, it didn't really seem to be about the dragon. To me it seemed to be about two people in love and they were meant for each other. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
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04-07-2007
Wayne Thomas
I doff my hat to you, sir! You've put together a truly rhytmic free verse fantasy that's simply, swee fantastic! The word pictures, the movement, the emotional content--all in all a terrific piece. Welcome aboard!
Wayne
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04-06-2007
Samantha Powers
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04-06-2007
Samantha Powers
Well first of all I love it. Second of all I love it. and third of all is magic supposed to spelled that way? i thought it was magic not magikc. Anyway i love fantasy so this gets a definite five from me. I love your details, they are so beautiful. Some of my favorite book series consist of the Inheritance Trilogy (eragon and eldest so far) and Harry Potter and dragon riders. This was wonderful especially since I love dragons. I think if we had dragons it would be way cooler than cars. This was so awesome I love it. And ya that is it, keep up the spectacular work.
Samantha (now a part of the CC commity!!!)
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04-06-2007
Sam Hackel-Butt
FOUR POINTS!? Only FOUR points from some past readers?! Oh my goodness. If I could, I'd give you a kagillion points. Simply one of the best poems I've ever read! The images, the way the verses were formed, the story line... magical. Wonderful. Mystical. Beautiful. I've always had a soft spot for fairy tales ^-^
-Sam
Of the CC
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