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09-29-2010
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
This was very interesting, and thought provoking. The story you told in this piece was unique and each stanza added more to the tale. Great work, keep it up!
~Leigh of the Commenting Community
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06-09-2007
Brittney N. Nasca
So sad... I too know how it is to always be the odd one out in everything. Even your own fmaily. I am still that way, but life gets better as you get older. Take ift from someone who has been there herself.
~Brittney~
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04-09-2007
Alma Hulbert
This was really sad. There title was sad all by itself. I hope that's not how you feel. You have your PnP family ;) Nothing wrong here. You and Leigh G. could be the next Emily Dickonsons, she was depressed, but strong. Another thing, the title wasn't in the poem itself. I like poems like that, even though mine are the opposite. The poems or works that are like those, they seems to be better than what the title indicates. On to more. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
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04-03-2007
Frank Fields
Well!! I was spellbound. Until the very end. The use of bold caps was like taking a pin to a balloon and bursting a magic ride that you had carried me on. For all the rest of this write, however, I liked it. Good images, good transitions, definitely going somewhere instead of a rambled collection of ideas, and technically it was also good. Consistent in your sentencing by capitalizing only the beginning word of each one and, glory be!, ending each with a period. Spelling all good too. The work read smoothly and really captivated my imagination with your esoteric ideas. Except for that last word. Overkill. I like these kinds of journeys, however. You will, of course, give us some more?
William :)
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