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Tears Mixing With The Roller Coaster Ride
by Samantha P. (Age: 15)
copyright 04-09-2007


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  Tears Mixing With The Roller Coaster Ride
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Tears can be pointless or meaningful
It all just depends on whether your emotions are overwhelming
Or someone has just punched you in the face

Flowers can be radiant and dazzling
It just depends on if they are soft and leathery
or withering away

Sometimes the silence in your head can be better
than the thoughts in your head that are bad

Even as I lay here with dead flowers surrounding me
They are still beautiful
And if you don't think they are now
There was a time when they where

Even though the tears in my eyes may be pointless
I still think they are meaningful
Because I was punched in the face
And that is what is overwhelming me with emotions

Since it is better to be silent in your head than to have thought
I scream loudly to let my pool of emotion flow like a pounding river

Eventually the river will dry up and the flowers will disappear completely
The thoughts in my head can't stay silent forever

Life is a matter of control and opinion
Depending on who you are they are locked away
And only you have the key
For others they couldn't catch emotion to lock it away

When your life is out of control it is like a roller coaster

So hold on for dear life


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06-23-2007 Alma H.    

This was very true. I like it when people don't use their whole poem to match their title, even though I do....-_- Anyway, I think it was really well put with deep emotion. With the punched in the face part, was that getting pushed away, or having your feelings hurt? Either way, you can over come it. We may have to hole on for dear life, but we must face that hold. Very good write. Talk to you later.
~Alma H.
06-11-2007 Brittney N. N.    

Very wise words of advice, and a very good write indeed. However I think you could have added a little mmore flow to it to make the read a little smoother, and in the line, "Depending on who you are they are locked away," I think you should put a comma between "Depending on who you are" and "they are locked away." Other then those few minor details a very good write. Keep working at it and you'll get much better.
~Brittney~
05-05-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

very wise words for one so young in years.
The dualistic nature of life is well-captured
in free and easy rhythm.

All pleasure is bought with pain; it is for you to decide whether it's worth it or not.

Thanks for the good read,

Rich
04-13-2007 Chris A.    

wow....thats deep sam....i luv it....
04-11-2007 David Pekrul    

Interesting thoughts. Tears can also be tears of joy and even live flowers can seem ugly when they are perhaps in the setting of a funeral. There are so many different ways to view the same thing, and yes, life is a matter of control and opinion, but it is also a matter of choices. We can choose to be happy and make the best of our situation, or we can choose to wallow in self-pity.
Your poem is obviously a good one, as it has prompted so many ideas and thoughts.
Well done.
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