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Alone In Despair - I Won't Find You There
by Greg Kis
copyright 05-03-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  Alone In Despair - I Won't Find You There
Picture Credits: Greg Kis

Where have you gone? I was lookin' around
Lookin' for a face...
For a trace.

I couldn't see you in the crowd
I closed my eyes and howled.

There are no secrets, there are no lies
Whispers, that we shared at night.

Memories that escape me
Find me when they wake me.

Alone in Despair...
I won't find you there.

Where are you? Where have you gone?
I was lookin' around... Lookin' for your face...
For a trace.

Where were you goin' yesterday?
Did you turn your head and see me so far away?

I couldn't see you in the crowd...
I closed my eyes and howled.

Excuse me, I just wanted to apologize
'Cause I couldn't understand all your lies.

Memories that escape me
Find me when they wake me.

Alone in Despair...
I won't find you there.

Where are you? Where have you gone?
I was lookin' around... Lookin' for your face...
For a trace.

Girl, I still reach for you
Here, where I remember you.

Sleepin' here so close to me
Baby wake me if you leave.

The memory that escapes me...won't wake me
...Can't wake me.


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05-27-2007 Lyle Berry    

As lyrics (depending on the melody of course)this could be a great song - as a poem it is rather full of cliches. I think it could be both a great song and a great poem if you strove for a little more original language and expression. Overall, I like the melancholy mood it set, but it could be improved with some careful thought. Best Regards, Lyle
05-04-2007 Brian Dickenson    

Yet again you show that there is little difference between good song writing and good poetry. Of course it's also true about bad songs and bad poetry, fortunately you produce the former.
It's a pity we cannot hear you play these for us.
I know that I would normally pick on poor spelling etc, but in a song, these are excusable.
One day maybe you will be famous and we can buy a CD of your work.
Then we could boast that we heard it first here on P-n-P.
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