She's always there
She always cares
My best friend
We'll stay together till the end
She always listens
Watching while her silver fur glistens
That's right- she's a cat.
Is something so wrong with that?
Anytime, anyplace
She's there to put a smile on my face
She's always here to brighten my day.
What more can I say?
Her warm purr,
her soft fur
Though she'll scratch and bite,
and usually puts up a fight,
her caring mew
is enough to pull me through
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This poem is, I assume, about your own cat, but I enjoyed thinking of the picture of Little Diana as I read it. I am not really a cat person myself. Or least I like dogs a good deal more, but the Sailor Moon cats are often over-looked when people think about their favorite BSSM characters. Luna is my second all-time favorite, and Diana certainly has the "Quintessence of Cute" vote all sown up.
This very enjoyable poem also made me think of my favorite "Cat poem": Pangur Ban. It was written in the Middle Ages, by a student of the monastery of Carinthia toiling away at making a copy of St. Paul's Epistles.
Sometimes Cats and animals are our only friends. When I feel bad I'll hold one of my cats, and somehow it makes me feel so much better. A wonderful poem, very cute. =D
Another poem to put a smile on my face and brighten my day. I know exactly how you feel as I have a brown and white cocker spaniel and he's the love of my life and my greatest friend.
Very nice. It's a cute little poem. I think the longer sentences throw the rythem off a little bit, but it still has a nice flow to it. Very nice. Keep up the good work.
~Brittney~
Aww, this is a sweet poem! I've never had a cat, however, I've always thought they were so cute! Anyway, I like the way you did an AABBCC (etc.) rhyming patern! Cool beans, man!
Haha, yeah, also, I like how the last line didn't rhyme like the rest. It was cool how you changed things up =]
I guess animals are always there for you. I wouldn't really know, because most of my pets were fish, because everyone in my family detests every animal I could possibly want, but anywayy..
Nice Job!!
Aw. This is a precious poem. I have three cats, and they are my world.. pathetic or not. My middle aged cat is sick and it makes me worry everyday. But I definately know how you feel, they put a smile on my face, too. I loved when they give you kisses or just want to snuggle. They're most certainly adorable. I love them. Nice write, Megan.
I think that this poem speaks for all of us who like cats, Megan. Though I do not own a cat myself, I would like to eventually. Almost everyone else has picked over any criticism to be offered, but it cannot be helped. Anyway, I agree with Leigh regarding the length: it does not ramble on and on nor does it cut itself too short... it is exactly the right length to proclaim the virtues of the feline. As the others before me have said, the punctuation is a bit iffy near the end, but it is not the kiss of death as far as the overall quality is concerned (at least for me).
If one is willing, improvement is not too hard to attain. All it requires is a will to go on and the desire to change what needs to be changed. Advice from others also helps, but in the end it is up to you to do the legwork. Good job!
Aww! That was great! I like short and simple poems. It gets to the point. And I also love poems that rhyme (you did a great rhyming job too). You might want to work on the meter here and there, but besides that, it was perfect (or should I say purrfect?)! I love your attitude when you say: "Is there something wrong with that?" I love my kitty, and this poem makes me think of him! You could add a bit more about the physical description, but it is fine the way it is! Great job!
This was true but if the title is felien friend I think you shouldn't just include cats in general. I didn't really think this was very descriptive as if not enough detail. The rhyming was talented but just not that great due to the fact of description. However I really like how you make it seem like it could be a human that is your friend in the beginning and then you corrrect any mislead thoughts and tell everyone that it is a cat. I think maybe if you add a lot more detail and possibly describe actions of the cat and make it longer that people would like it better and it would be a five star.
In one of the lower lines it says mew im not sure but i think that it should be meow i'm not positive.
Keep up the good work and try and add more detail to this poem or others and maybe people will like them more.
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