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Amazingly enchanting you caught exact emotions of love and the back-round to it as well and explained the feelings of love without throughly going into detail
Hi frank
I liked your poem. it conjures a full exerience.
1. You created a fantasy world which created an illusional reality
2. You repeatedly wove sound imagery in your poem so I heard throughout varied sounds. sighs, drumming, humming, chimes, kisses, water pouring i cascaedes, songs, lyre playing, wind blowing.
all of this made for a real audio experience reading your poem.
3. What are the things of love?
It's nice in this crazy noisy world to read a peaceful, harmonious, expressive loving piece like this poem that soothes the mind and soul.
barbara
A poem written with reflection and feeling, one using sound to control pace, and force the reader to pause at the moment, well crafted and the use of meter to hold and express points of view a master touch, special stuff... Walt
The rhyme and rhythm were nice and lyrical, and although you occasionally changed the meter a little it still worked well. The visuals were good. Overall a very enjoyable reading experience.
Indeed, nothing so rewarding than reading a poem of love. Ahh, I see you've decided to rhyme this piece. Very nicely done William. The flow of the poem is absolutely smooth as porcelain. Not to mention the sweet-to-the-touch meter of the poem. Also, the imagery woven into the sentences are vivid and eloquent; your descriptions of the faerie really illustrate in the readers' minds. Oh, and yes, the picture looks very beautiful, capturing the essence of this piece.
Ahhh, nothing like reading original poetry about love that I can actually enjoy and hearing the cartoons my father fell asleep to...did I mention those cartoons were the Fairly Odd Parents? XD Okay, now about the poem.
Very good form, great flow, and solid structure. The rhymes flowed very naturally, and didn't limit the poem at all. The picture also captured the mood of the poem. I didn't find any errors, and I enjoyed this poem more than I have your last few. Good work! Keep it coming!
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