Time (by Dawn S.)
by
Megan C.
copyright 06-15-2007
Age Rating: 1 to 127
Picture Credits:
Time
Ticking, ticking
Unstoppable
Brings pain
Brings joy
Always moving
Ages
Affects all
Clocks count it
People hate it
Destroys
Renews
No one can stop it
The most powerful thing there is
Lasts forever
Time
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lol ive always wanted to write a poem about time but it just confused people and it made perfect sense to me
i have seen a few tiem poems in my day lol which hasnt been many
i think william has written 1 here
it was way different from his tho
i love how its short simpel and to the point
the writing scheme was amazing it blended perfect and my brother just pointed out it is a ladder
nice
never wouldve looked at that
a poem is a poem i read it and i like it or i dont
lol but in this case i love it so u get a 5 star
no errors than again it was so short
i would say add more detail but its just perfect without it =)
keep up the amazing writing
Antha
of the CC
Just to add to the comments already made which I heartily agree with -I loved the imagery in every line -very good. It made the whole piece
stick in my mind.