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A voice cries at the night, emotion explodes, hurt and pain, images push past message, a write that explodes, tripping past teaching, waiting and wanting response, yet little comes, ages and pages of many that have stopped before override thought, a write filled with edge, look forward to the next... Walt
Very strong, very powerful, and quite meaningful. I like the characters that you brought out-- it gave your poem a certain validity in human terms, that might not have been there otherwise. It is a very coherent piece which is opened well, developed nicely, and closed appropriately. It is a work that every hypocrite should read, then look in their own mirror of judgment. On the technical, third line from the bottom the word "ture" does actually exist, but I doubt if you meant to apply it right there. I believe it's the third stanza from the bottom--the spelling of "cant's" and "wont's" don't need the apostrophe if you are showing plural form. Little things, granted, but still there. Will you be sharing more of your works, again, please?
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