If Only He Knew
by
Leah G.
(Age: 15)
copyright 06-14-2007
Age Rating: 10 to 127
What would he think if he knew the true me?
What would he say if he knew of my past?
If he knew of my deep-darkest secrets,
How could a relationship start and last?
I was harassed, scarred, pushed around
Talked to no classmates for 3 months at lunch alone
And oh, the treacherous emails I received,
The cursing calls I received on my phone
My friends abandoned me and stabbed me in the back
I was the loser, the outcast, the lost
Would he think it was just girlish games?
How could he understand the pain and the cost?
And that day, the day of the attempt on my life
Would he be grateful that I am still here today?
How could he understand the pain I still feel?
Would he feel sorry and then just walk away?
The chain mail on 25 reasons to hate me
The people who signed pledging to ignore me too
Would he feel pity and look down upon me?
If only my past and my nightmares he knew
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... amazing... I am not often left utterly speechless(at home they say I never shut my mouth, but I do, but that's when I've got a pencil and paper), but right now, I am. I like it, a lot. It's not too short, but it's not too long either(not like, yawn, whens the poem end??). Great work.
Erbarley! Megan C.
lol i think u should change this it is sort of reduntant
if you are receiving phone calsl i dont think u will recieve them anywhere ese but on a phone lol
perhaps the cursing calls i recieve on my phone?
or cursing messages on my phone
i dunno but that just sounds a little wierd
it is so true and it seems like this is a very self conciosu poem and very hard to deal with a tough past but if the guy doesnt think your worth it and he judges u by your past then the guy is not worth it
just to let u kno my opinion
i thought this was a great poem and often times this is what many of us think perhaps not as complex and scary
but it was very detailed and i thought it was very good
Antha
of the CC
Possibly the most emotional poem of yours I've read so far. I was seriously moved when I first read this. Some of the lines you wrote here are really powerful. I've always said that your writing style is amazing!
Your rhyming, as again, is awesome. I agree with Leigh that your longer lines are some of your best. They tell more and just seem to be more poetic.
The story I read in this poem was pretty sad to read, but look at you now! Kid Genius! Tall, smart, and pretty! And millions of friends that would never let you down! Bad memories are things of the past, so no need to feel down anymore, ya?
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