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I'm Labeled
by Regina Pate (Age: 29)
copyright 06-15-2007


Age Rating: 16 to 127

  I'm Labeled
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Can't catch my breath
Cat caught my tongue
Can't spit it out
It comes out all wrong

Try and write it down
But the words just wont come
I don't make a sound
My mind is feeling numb

I have to write
There is nothing else to do
I don't want to fight
I can't, I'm threw

I lye awake
I sit here and think
I draw a blank
No sense I make

Can't catch my breath
My heart pounds in my chest
I need to slow down
So my soul can rest

My mind is made up
It's hard headed and stuck
My heart is soft
It can change with a touch

Physically I'm able
My body is capable
But this vehicle's unstable
Manic Depressive I'm labeled


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08-02-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

Go to where your true feelings lie.
Go to where you have deeply experienced them.
Go to where you have remembered them and forgotten them.
Let the subconscious of your mind take over.
Think in visions not words.
Set yourself free of all inhibitions.
The pen will take care of the rest.

Good poem, thanks,

~Rich
06-19-2007 Lyle Berry    

I enjoyed the rhyme and rhythm scheme with about five syllables per line - accent on the second. I e-mailed a suggestion to you for possible improvement - to keep the meter consistent throughout. But even without the change, this was a moving and well crafted piece. Minor typos such a "lye" vs lie, but otherwise great. Enjoyed this very much
Best Regards, Lyle
06-17-2007 Brittney N. N.    

Wow. Very beautiful. The flow and rhythm to this is beautiful. It makes it very easy to read and understand. I can understand this feeling. A severe writers block not only messes with a writers work, but with their personal life too. My dad pointed this out to me. He told me whenever I'm not writing something or complaining of a writers block I seem withdrawn and depressed. It shocked me because not even I noticed it, but alas, I suppose that is the life of a writer. Keep up the good work. I really like this poem.
~Brittney~
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