Can't Let Go by Brittney N. N.

Authors Note: I first came up with the idea for this when I was sitting on a bus listening to my iPod. A series of songs that came up one after another all explained in some how I felt. So I wrote down bits of lyrics that best fit me from the songs and twisted them a bit to fit into my poem.
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Babe,
it's over it's done,
for good.
But, though
the battles, are
and through
you're still waging the war.
Let me go,
let it die.
There is no,
more you and I.

You saw you know,
that we're done.
That it's over
and the war is won.
But whenever I'm there,
and you're with her,
You try to hurt me
and I let it work.

Although I drill it,
through your head.
That we're done
and the relationships' dead.
My feelings still last,
though I've seemed to move on.
Maybe intentions
were misunderstood.
Because you feel wronged,
as I do too.

I can't let it go,
no matter how hard I try.
I have someone new,
but over you I still cry.
I fueled your anger,
you fueled my fear.
I'm better off alone.
It's too much to bare.

I only bring pain
to those around me.
To those I care for,
just let the tears drown me.
My spirit is crushed,
my will…gone.
The pain that surrounds me
is created a wall.

I've naught to do,
but sit here and pray.
Pray that today
will be the day.
The day I can do it,
that day I give in.
The day that I die,
the day my life ends.

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by Brittney N. N. (Age: 17)
copyright 07-28-2007

Age Rating: 13 to 127