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    10-24-2007 Walter Jones
As a writer we observe and play with form and thought process, I found this work to be creative and filled to the brim with life, enjoyed the play with message and words laid out to create a picture perfect, very clever, special this one is..
Walt
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    10-22-2007 Richard Reed Jr
WOW! and AWESOME!
This was magnificently clever,
and made sense as a poem after I read the below comment and even then read it over ten times until it finally sunk in.
This really borders on genius and far and away deserved the gold star!
Congratulations!
~Rich
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    10-21-2007 Samantha P.
"Roses judge by a thorn.
Beauty is only skin deep."
says the lover
who then smiles.
"Evil is hidden somewhere
by a rose.
We see beauty,
yet are stuck
with the pain
of a rose's thorns."
GAG ME
i feel very stupid for not seing wht this meant before
this was amazing
i mean as in I LOVEEEEEE IT!!!
so now that i understand it i can tell you that
and thank you for explaining what it meant it was like a cloud going poof before my eyes
love it love it love it!
Sammy
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    10-16-2007 Samantha P.
Wierd...and confusing...i wanmt you to email me and sort of descirbe what those symbol thingies ment. This was a good poem, and very original format...although like i said it didnt really make sense to me.
And I think the title Went with the poem, but the poem was short....
Good poem though, i love creativity in peoples poems it gets you places in life, and proves that your poem is truly yours
Sammy
of the CC
But liek i said i want you to email me the symbol defintions so i understand it better
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