Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

 Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID
password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
0 Writers

Vivya Cristina
Kazu Siro
2 Free Members

2 Members
27 Guests

Deceiving The Mind
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 07-17-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Deceiving the mind,
Is like saying you're blinded by love...
Only the other day,
I realized I was deceiving my own mind.

Now opening my eyes,
I'm torn and tattered,
And cut inside,
I'm so tired I just lay on the floor.

How could you,
Blind me with your love,
Your lies and mistakes,
I just couldn't see them.

What was I, a toy?
A plan in your twisted head?
Have you got what you want?
Or you still craving more?

I cry my tears of regret,
knowing I was to blind to see,
The missing pages in my fairytale book.
I wish you hadn't done this.

My mind seeks refuge,
But I'm to tired to try,
Maybe I should leave you,
Let you, and your shadow win.

She's been waiting a long time now,
And I was in the fight, blind to see.
She must be happy,
You must be happy.

I'm on the floor begging for no more,
My tears mean nothing,
And my blood even less,
true love....just wasn't made for me.

No longer can I deceive my mind,
For hypnotizing cannot work,
And the power of my mind even weaker,
I just lay on the floor praying you'll change.

Home sweet home; no longer.


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Poetry

Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

10-17-2007 Walter Jones    

In voice a common theme of lingering too long, written in creativity upon self evaluation, found to be clever in form and word use, excellent.. Walt
09-19-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

Another awesome dark love poem.
You are becoming quite good at these.
And I like this kind of poetry and your writing style.

I especially loved the ending.

Keep up the excellent work,

~Rich
07-18-2007 Samantha P.    

What was I a toy?
A plan in your twisted head?
Have you got what you want?
Or you still craving more?

lol this should be
What, was I a toy?
Or are you still craving more?

this sentence
Let you and your shadow win.
should be
Let you, and your shadow win.

She's been waiting alone time now,

i think this should be
She's been waiting a long time now,
or something is improper
And I was in the fight blind,
this is improper lol should be
And I was in the fight, and blind
or I was blind in the fight

ok lol i saw some more errors but....I'll like meail those to you or something i just pointed out the major ones.
lol ok now that thats done with
this was so beautiful but sad
it kind of reminds me of my poem but of course better
lol
usually i try not to make sense or something like that lol
you gave it so much detail and it makes you want to cry to think of all the times this has happened in in the world
great poem
i LOVE!!!!!!!!!!! it
Visitor Reads: 167
Total Reads: 184
Comments: 3

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:


Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats