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Roses Have Thorns, or do They?
by Brent Richard J. (Age: 12)
copyright 08-19-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Day by day,
Finding myself,
New things to do,
Things decay,
More things to mourn.

I pour my heart out,
Get shunned away,
Heart aches,
Or is that hatred,
Or even the thirst for blood?

I wonder about my life,
In denial day after day,
Decisions make me hurt,
But I have to know myself,
Or else I shall live a lie.

Possessions surround me,
Some I need,
Some I don't,
The ones I don't make me wonder,
Is this all necessary?

I love some I hate some,
Some I want to kill,
Some I want tokiss,
Others make me wonder,
Do I really know you?

But really,
Every thing isn't just white and black,
Every Rose has thorns,
All hate has love,
Maybe I was wrong about you and me.


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10-15-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

Brent,

Perhaps you should write more poems in the middle of the night. This was awesome. I hate to repeat what every one else said, but it's all true -then some.

This is deep, with a great message, some ying/yang in it.
For me the best was:All hate has love"
Does that also mean all love has hate?

Thanks for sharing, welcome and visit my sight when you have the chance, I think you will appreciate my stuff,

~Rich
09-10-2007 Everett (dale) Pogue    

Brent: This is an amazing write. To have such maturity at eleven is great. I read the poem three times and each time it spoke more clearly. Technically I could use question marks after "Do I really know you?", "Or is that hatred?", "Is all this necessary?". For a reader these marks are like words. I think your line "all hate has love" was profound. Thank you for a neat poem. Dale
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