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The Doves and I
by Lyle Berry (Age: 61)
copyright 08-03-2007


Age Rating: 18 to 127

  The Doves and I
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A Lady of the Evening, strolled by on my avenue;
She was way beyond believing, she was not like me or you.
I asked her: “May I paint your picture, nude upon a stool?”
(I promised not to touch her, just my canvas, nothing cruel.)

She answered: “Oh, bold sir, why me? What about me has appeal?”
I quavered: “Everything I see…there’s nothing that’s more real.”
She said: T’will be a hundred bucks - no whips or funny drivel.”
(Expensive for one down on luck, but who was I to quibble?)

We walked to my room down the street - a dingy, rooftop hovel;
Her linen pooled around bare feet, I stared, but did not grovel.
I sketched her bold in charcoals three, her breasts so pert and fair;
“Hurry now, I’m cold,” said she, while I prayed “Let down your hair.”

She posed for but an hour, as I painted all I saw;
Her visage growing dour, while I stood there rapt, in awe.
Oh, how I ached to hold her, but I put aside my lust;
My intentions showing bolder, could I forsake such trust?

Her smile wrenched my yearning soul, I could not bear much more;
She’d all I craved to make me whole, small matter she’s a whore.
Then, tragically, my portrait thru, the colors wet, but drying;
She’d dressed to leave, what could I do? Roof doves and I lay crying.



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10-05-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

In my eyes a love and lust for beauty.
And such painful twinges when she can not be possessed.

I liked the rhyme and rhythm very much.
Each line was filled with great imagery.

And a beautiful story told.

Who could ask for more?

Thank you,

~Rich


10-04-2007 Walter Jones    

So it is an artists touch leaves in mind a bit of trust and when the ages come to play, wish and want turned the other way, your writing is always on the cutting edge, a storyteller, and perhaps a tall tale at that, skill and more mixed on a palette.. Walt


08-17-2007 Catherine Wilson    

Absolutely awesome piece Lyle. It's tasteful, illustrates lust, and yearning and all the emotions one would experience in that setting. It's simple and yet very well written. Thank you for sharing this piece.


08-07-2007 Denise Fairgrieve    

I just loved this piece. The rhyme was enough to pull you in, but also to show what you were trying to say.

The expression in this piece is one that could easily be read. And yet, there were no hard words to try to decipher in order to read and understand.

Overall, a very excellent piece.


08-04-2007 Regina Pate    

ha ha, cute, I liked it very much, nice pic, I've used it before but erased for age appropriateness on my king of hearts poem, check it out sometime, great write, good job, thanks,

Regina


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