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While this poem's sentiments were familiar ones many of us feel, you still portrayed it nicely and the ending leaves the reader smiling. The way you word things keeps the flow going and the end balanced things out. I have no grammatical picks either, so good work! You've posted a lot since I've been gone. XD Keep it coming!
Leigh
AKA Sailor Saturn Plushie W/ A Butcher Knife
Ah, I can relate to this. My hips are too big and so is my tummy. (=^^=) But that's okay, I'm comfortable with who I am. The people around me can just deal with it. I loved the poem, it really moved me. I can't find anything to say besides that it's AWESOME and I LOVED IT! I hope you'll keep writing positive poems! Jeez, I've been gone a really long time...
aaww i wanted ot cry when reading this, we need a lot of those people in the world. especially with all the hatred and rude comments. This was so beautiful, like people say if you can count your true friends on one hand then they must truly be your true friends. I loved how you made this piece rhym, and flow it worked beautiful, and this is my new pnp favorite poem.
if you couldnt tell im back, school is slaughter but i finally got some free time
good job =)
Antha
Leah, this was wonderful.
I feel that way, only its I'm too skinny, and my hips are to small xD.
Anyways enough about me and my skinny hips, your feelings felt like they we're put into words. How people are imperfect, and we aren't how we want to be, whether its how you feel or me, we all want to be different, in some way or another.
But we are all beautiful on the inside.
Everyone is.
No matter what.
Great work Leah,
-Lauren
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