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In Pieces
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 09-03-2007


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
As I kneel on the floor,
picking up piece after piece,
I can't believe what's left,
Almost nothing.

As I sit on my bed crying,
I can't fix them together,
I can't find a way to mend what's been done,
I can't mend my heart.

Why do you let her?
Why do you listen?
We used to be happy.
It used to be just us.

I'm sorry you feel like this.
But I don't understand....
How can I be an embarrassment?
If you used to love who I was.

Forget emotions,
Forget love,
Everything I said is now non-existent
I have no voice.

I can't stand it anymore,
your double personality,
me being worthless,
What did I do?

Am I supposed to be her?
Darker than the darkest forever,
I thought it was over,
but you let her drag me back in...

I'm just worthless and embarrassment and i GIVE up,
please leave me alone,
Don't hurt me anymore......




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09-16-2007 Samantha P.    

This is so sad, it reminds of of a song by the veronicas.
I love how you capitilize give to make it have more power and emotion. often times we think love is love, or it dies within us. or people just look to other results.
cheating is so wrong
and someone who is dating a guy like this shouldnt ever listen to what they say for you can never be with someone that doesnt like you for you
Beautiful write
best of luck
Samantha
09-05-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

A lonely voice in the wilderness. I can hear it crying through the trees, but I can't see who it is that is crying.

A haunting refrain written with beautiful sad words -very powerful.

Your clear images reach out and pull me into your poem.

Great Job,

~Rich
09-03-2007 Everett (dale) Pogue    

I felt this was more than a poem. It was a voice sharing of real-life pain and disappointment. Your courage to write your feelings is neat. It is also therapeutic. Very moving. Hang in there! I would change the next to last line just a tiny bit. Maybe a period after "worthless". Begin a new sentence with "An". "And" doesn't fit there.
dale
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