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10-19-2007
Praveen Agnihotri
Good message!
Unfortunately, it is too big a temptation to swim against the flow.
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10-03-2007
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
*approving nod* Oil, coal, and all the other fossil fuels damage our planet Earth and give most of us what we want, but is too often mixed with blood. I won't start my rant on the war in Iraq and it's effects on America (especially immigration) because that would make this page three times it's current size...
The flow was a little bumpy, but the ideas shined true. The topic was something everybody who gives a skaata has thought about. I wasn't sure what to expect when I saw the title, but I enjoyed this piece.
Humans are destroying the word in countless ways, and the burning and attaining of oil is one of the lead reasons.
Leigh of the Commenting Community
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09-18-2007
Shannon Walter
This peice is AMAZING!!! I am so for your poem I totally agree with everything you are saying. I am a total hippy and I am out to save the world!
Good JOb!!
Shannon
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09-14-2007
Shannon Jaime
Nice sardonic tone here. I especially like the first stanza, as it creates a striking contrast between water, something clear and pure, and oil, something dark and slick and tainted. In a way, those images seem to represent the discrepancies in the words and actions of recent politicians.
I agree with the previous comments. The repetition really grabbed my attention, as did the rhetorical questions. Will we ever discover the truth? Hopefully we will find the answers someday.
Great job all around!
Sincerely,
*S*
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