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Lost
by Emily Garwood (Age: 21)
copyright 09-18-2007


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
As I ponder over everything,
These last few weeks,
I just don't understand,
And I just don't see.

Sat at the table.
Staring at nothing,
My eyes have glazed over,
And there's a sadness in my speech.

I just can't help it,
I feel so weak at the knees,
God tell me what I did wrong,
And why can't I sleep.

I'm lost.

I watch you fall,
You work, and I see you getting weak,
But you've got the strength,
Just to take it all out on me.

I care for you,
And I'm worried your ill,
But I feel ill inside,
You've got me down and I'm in pain.

I really don't understand,
I feel like crying,
Screaming my frustration,
But I can't say a word.

Not a peep from me,
To anyone,
You don't allow it,
But my bottles going to break.

So I'm LOST.


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11-06-2007 Richard Reed Jr    

You have a way of moving me so much with your emotion, like a hundred silver daggers being thrown into my heart.
The narrator's words again are sad depicting tragedy, but in a way that says, "Well, that's life", and it's accepted and the narrator moves on. I certainly hope the narrator is not you.

My best wishes for you Emy,

~Rich
09-19-2007 Everett (dale) Pogue    

Wow, Emily! "Lost" really stirred me. I felt for him. Then I even felt more for you. The caregiver always has it tough, and like you said, they often have to be silent. What was the illness? You leave us in the dark and that is good. Thanks for a really good poem. Dale
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