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10-16-2007
Samantha Powers
I wonder what was in that closet, maybe something deep inside never to be unlocked, or found. Like something inperfect sealed away. Very nice write
I do wonder what it is, and it reminds me of a child with a toy, that he tires of and tosses it away
Your poem was short, and detailed which is what is so nice when I read short poetry, lately it all seems to be detailed, and marvelous
Indeed i like how you make it rhyme, and the end is wierd...like someone just gives up and walks away, although at least they said bye. hehe
Nice poem
Samantha
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10-02-2007
Walter Jones
youth fits well into space written, my gun, my adventure, my vision, my idealistic look at country, my mark of who and what I was, each a tool for good and bad, all in their place, to be grabbed and used as needed, a bye as skill is not what it once was... a good write.. Walt
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