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10-05-2007
Frank Fields
A read as I read it that allows for many interpretations, if any. But that wouldn't be fair to a master such as you, or would it? To claim that you've written a piece simply for the beauty of the words, the sound of the song, and the maybe tale it tells? I see little bits and pieces of so many things, conjured by the visions as they collide against my own experiences, that I begin to wonder how you could know those things about me? Or did you let the work, itself, take control and tell its own tale--your hand being but the instrument of something greater or lesser?
For the reason that there is no answer, save the closest one found on William's stage, I will simply tell you that I liked it very much. And will read it many times--each time seeing something different. ^^
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10-05-2007
Lyle Berry
Wow, Walter! You have done it again! Just when I think I've read your best, you outshine yourself (and most of us humble cohorts) and write another poem that cuts like a rapier plunged into the soul of the reader to make them feel the depth of your feelings - at least sense it so strongly as to share it. This has to be my current favorite of yours but then, knowing how you are, you will write another that moves me even more and it will have to take a lesser (but never a superceded) place in my memories of Walt's fine wordcrafts. Best Regards, Lyle
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