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I am Egypt

by bluecomits (Age: 22)
copyright 10-04-2007


Age Rating: 10 +

I am Egypt, the land of history
I am Egypt, I am no mystery
I watch the view
The glistening sea,
The blazing sun stares back at me
The golden pyramids, built so high
Match the constellations in the sky
The myths and legends lie inside,
the heart of Egypt it will not die
The curse of the mummies
Who are yet to awake
Are crawling with scorpions
And poisonous snakes.

I’m mesmerized by the river Nile,
The longest river it runs for miles
I remember Moses float in that river
Not knowing soon who he would deliver
Cleopatra oh mighty queen,
Your foreign lover that I have seen
You had no hair you were bald,
You wore a wig when Anthony called

Ramses ruled the old ancient kingdom.
He lived for long and bared many children.
He had so many elegant wives,
Not one, not three, not four, not even five
The glittery sand of the Sahara desert,
Was there in the past and now in the present
I made this all come alive
I hope forever it will survive.






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        12-16-2007     Lauren Turner        

Wow. This was just as good as your other one!
Your style was one of the things that I really liked about this. I can't find any really big mistakes with your grammar.
You did a nice job, keep writing!
-Laur

        10-30-2007     Misty Montier        

I am always in awe when such a young person as yourself can so eloquently put thoughts into words. Beautiful poem. Keep up the work!

        10-14-2007     Alexandra Spencer        

I really like the poem, the way it rhymes, the way the poem was set out and overall it was amazing.

I saw nothing wrong with your grammar, but some other members might comment on some words that are spelt differently to how they spell it but don't worry about that.

It's nice to see another person from the UK great to have you here



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