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by Walter Jones (Age: 63)
copyright 10-24-2007


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
None cares to read the poet or the rhyme
A lyric is not out of place and time

A dollar to spend makes it a tragic tale
Full of sex and blood and jail

No need have we for artists brush laid to words
Or sounds that angels have heard

A message written in well no soul is to valuable
The a poets work will sell

In slumber at keys I let the volume flow
To places only poets will know

Each writes his report of what is on the land
And in hope we all share but we can

Few if any publish works to view
Seldom does the publisher review

A middle of the road is found at a robber's den
It is the greatest of where and when

Still gathers dust on a mantle tall
And tears of joy from children down the hall

He was my dad and published after all


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10-30-2007 Misty Montier    

Ioth agree and diagree with what Wayne said. The rhymes are definitely fine, and the reading is good. However, I don't find the rhythm ragged at all. To me this poem reads very much like a William Butler Yeats poem.


10-24-2007 Wayne Thomas    

Very readable, as yours generally are. Rhymes are OK, but the rhythm is a little ragged this time. I can see from the appearance and the reading that this is not a finished piece, so I'm positive a good poem will be even better from the edit. Keep it up, Walt.
Wayne



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