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Ioth agree and diagree with what Wayne said. The rhymes are definitely fine, and the reading is good. However, I don't find the rhythm ragged at all. To me this poem reads very much like a William Butler Yeats poem.
Very readable, as yours generally are. Rhymes are OK, but the rhythm is a little ragged this time. I can see from the appearance and the reading that this is not a finished piece, so I'm positive a good poem will be even better from the edit. Keep it up, Walt.
Wayne