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I
by
Shannon W.
(Age: 16)
copyright 11-22-2007
Age Rating: 13 to 127
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Why can’t I ever be happy,
Why must I always be sad?
Why does it seem that everything goes wrong,
Why does life hate me so much?
I know I have made mistakes and still do,
But I am working on them,
So please I beg of you to forgive me,
For the all awful things that I have done.
It seems I can never do anything right:
I lie,
I cheat,
I steal,
How can anyone like a person such as me?
I hurt everyone around me,
I block everyone out.
I want to keep silent forever,
I want to scream on the top of my lungs.
I want people to know how I feel,
I want to hide from the world.
I want to do no wrong,
I want to be happy.
I need to move on with my life,
No longer live in the past.
I need to let go of regret,
And fulfill my life’s destiny.
I need to come to peace with my mother,
And realize that what she does can no longer affect me negatively.
I should shoot for my dreams,
I should never give up.
I should never let anyone get me down,
I should always believe in myself.
I can’t shoot for my dreams,
I am unable to reach them.
I will always give up,
I will always be affected by people and what they say.
I can never believe in myself.
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12-05-2007 Samantha P.
Wow i feel the same way often times. Just wanting people to understand, and it drives me crazy when people know your there and you need someone but who would want to help you after all the mistakes and things youve done wrong?
well, i really loved the expression in this, reminds me of a song. Also i like how you say what you need to do, but you think you are unable to do it. I feel that way a lot, trust me. However it shows that things you want to fix are harder to fix then they seem.
This poem was like looking in a mirror
great write, everything about this poem was great, the structure, description, words.
Sammy of the CC
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12-02-2007 Lauren T.
I see what you mean.
We aren't perfect, and thats something we all hate about ourselves. Yet others seem to see things that we don't, thats a thing I don't understand about love, the fact that someone could love imperfections. I feel that way, yet I found out that someone used to like me, and I felt so shocked, and loved.
Imperfections are part of life and are sometimes the reason why we doubt that anyone could love us, our weaknesses, our mistakes, self hate and how we wish to be perfect.
You protrayed that wonderfuly in this poem, and I think everone can relate to this in someway. Your style was wonderful, your imagery was right on, I can't find any spelling mistakes, and its a beautiful poem.
Love,
Lauren
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