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Save Yourself
by Cassie S. (Age: 15)
copyright 12-15-2007


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I died today,
but I don't know why,
I wasn't the one,
to say good-bye.

I died so that I knew,
what happens to me affects others,
others like you.

I died so that you would see,
what you do influences others,
others like me.

I died so that I could stand on the rim,
to see if it would affect others,
others like him.

You died to make a fuss,
to see if it would affect others,
others like us...

So now I hope you see,
if you can't save yourself,
you can't save me...

I died today,
and now I think I know why...
I just wanted to be the first to say good-bye...

-2006


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05-23-2008 Brooke M.    

Very vivid and deep. It painted pictures in my mind as I read, and each word expresses great emotion. It was very sad and beautiful....amazing job on this! Keep up the spectacular work!
12-16-2007 Lauren T.    

Many pictures were put in my mind while reading this. Thats one of the things that make this a good poem. Thanks for the good read!
Some of it sounded forced though, somewhat like my own poems, but it was still very nice.
I think that my other comment wasn't that much of a help and I didn't really see what you meant, so I'll give advice here.
I liked your 3 line style, very different, but nice.
Your emotions are well displayed here.
The loss of someone could make someone feel like the world is falling on them, and it does matter if someone is alive or not.
Lovely poem.
I'm off to read your other works!
-Laur
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