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Taking Over
by Cassie S. (Age: 15)
copyright 01-08-2008


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Who is it?
The one that haunts me,
the one that demolishes
everything I have..
He takes me over,
won't let my thoughts emerge,
opens his doors,
and closes mine.
He writes all my novelties,
how I collapse,
and don't know what I'm doing,
how it's him,
and not me.
He pierces through my aching head,
destroys all my thoughts,
and replaces them
with all wrongs.
He agitates me,
when he haunts my head,
when he puts those words in my mouth.
he can't stand it,
when people try to change that,
and say they love me.
They can open their own damn doors,
I don't need them,
he opens all my doors,
he controls me,
and it's taking over...

-March 3, 2006


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06-26-2008 Brooke M.    

Great poem! Very deep, haunting, and dark. It all wrapped together wonderfully and rhymed wondefully. Strong and well written, it was a piece that expressed itself well. With the controlling part, who exactly is controlling you? Well, whoever it is, I hope you get control back! I know it sucks to be controlled. (been there:( Good work!!
01-15-2008 Rayna Leitch    

To me it sounds like someone is having an abusive realtionship. I like this one, it is very moving yet sad to think about this actually is real for some people. Oh and by the way you were right about the mirror. It is about some one looking into a mirror while talking to someone eles. I know talk about weird, but I was being random. Well I'll be writting another one as soon as they let me. I hope to hear form you soon.
01-13-2008 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

It is sad when something or someone makes the decisions for you. You loose that originality that each one of us has. No one does everything the same and the differences are what make life good. I hope you take control back, because you deserve to live like you choose not them! Anthony
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