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Oshiete
by Leigh G. (Age: 14)
copyright 12-01-2007
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Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
“Teach me the definition of ‘strength’
I wonder if it means to carry out my original intention at any cost
Or does it mean to protect what I must even if it means laying down my life?”


Oshiete
Why can I be so decisive about some things,
But have all thoughts end in confusion when it comes to you?

Oshiete
I know where I stand
But could you tell me what’s outside my world?
Because we were more than six thousand dimensions apart
But now we’re not even in the same timeline
I haven’t heard your voice
Since forgetting the tone of our last goodbye

Oshiete
What’d you do to fix my thoughts upon your name?
It’s my own fault, in the end
But the distance doesn’t effect me like it did
I can still remember the happiness making you smile brings me
Even when I lose count of the weeks it’s been since I last felt it

Oshiete
How divert my thoughts from you and to reality?
Out of all the things that can never be,
It was doomed to be you and me
You’ve told me that so simply so many times
But your expression is so stoic when you do
When I do make you smile,
I long to hold onto the hope there’s something more in your eyes

Oshiete
Why does your presence fill me with peace?
And our time apart torments me with anxiety?
You’ve made it so simple
To accept reality with out pain
But pain completes every portion of my life

Tell me
How I can be so strong and decided,
Yet so broken and confused at the same time?

Oshiete
Who stands where?
Can a different emotion stand somewhere else?
That’s the only explanation I can see

Tell me…
Was that your shadow…
Passing by the window to my world?

Teach me the definition of ‘strength’
Is it to hold to my world and most precious hope,
Or learn how to say goodbye with a smile?


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12-14-2007 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Ah... and the age old question... is it strength to hold on, clenched fists, and gritted teeth? Or is it strength to elegantly and gracefully let it go?

So many works, so many movies, so many songs... all try to answer that question. From long long ago, to recent films as the Titanic (ok, not SO recent)... when she wanted to hang on... but let him slip away into the depths of the unknown.

Don't we see the same situation played and replayed throughout both life imagined and real? And myself, hold on to a 20 year relationship "for the kids"... or let it go... "for the kids"... ???

Anyway, this could be or could NOT be what you thought as you wrote... but it IS what I thought as I read.

Great job, as always. (And thank you for always reading my works. I have a TON of catching up to do!)

Mary/BrytEyz


12-05-2007 Wayne Thomas    

Woo-hoo!! Guess what!
Great stuff as always, though some lines required several readings in order for me to get the sense of them, although I guess that's one of the things poetry is all about. The feelings definitely ring true---and you've found the secret of true poetry: constant writing! Keep it up! Wayne


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