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Heart
by Shannon Jaime (Age: 19)
copyright 12-23-2007


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
Below the pipe that plays the wind,
Above the acid sea,
Is the place where pain begins:
It thrums, it thrums in me.

Right of limb and left of lung,
Sealed by seams and skin,
Sings a song too often sung:
It hums, it hums within.

Far from wombs which do not bleed,
Behind the cage of bone,
Weeps the wood with strings that plead:
It strums, it strums alone.

Crimson bright and scarlet sweet,
With lightning flash and thunder beat,
Drums the red rogue drearily
The rhythm cruel of misery.

And so it comes, and so it goes;
And oh, it knows my woes,

It knows.


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01-03-2008 Walter Jones    

Image and sound blend to perfect voice, a well structured poem with many doors to open and view, enjoyed the clever use of structure, mind triggers, picture pull, back ground steady beat, waiting and looking for more to read from your pen.. Walt
12-26-2007 Leah G.    

wow. i loved this. Everything fit so perfectly! the rhyme, rhythm, flow, wording just came together just like a puzzle. I liked how you described the heart based on location in the body, and also about how you felt about it. this was beautiful. Nothing to change. perfect.

Keep on writing

Leah
12-26-2007 Mike Gallimore    

I love this poem! What a clever use of form and language. I am a big fan of "still life" poems -- poems inspired by everyday things that we see all around us. Encore!
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