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01-22-2008
Megan Cox
I finally got the chance to read one of your poems! ^-^ I'm not a long comment person, but I try to say what I feel. I liked this poem a lot! I loved the last two lines, too funny! I was in a bad mood until now, your poem made me smile. That takes a lot. Great poem! I'll try to read more now! ^-^ Erbarley!
Megan
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12-16-2007
Mehrina Butt
*laugh* I love those last two lines. Even though the whole poem seems to be a bit morbid, the last two lines were just funny. XD
I was actually a bit surprised by this poem, because your rhythm is a bit weaker than usual. There's a few places where the amount of syllables don't match or nearly match, so it sounds a bit awkward at places. Also, it was unusually short. But your rhymes were, as usual, excellent and overall, I think it was a good poem. Not one of your best, but still good!
~*Meh*~
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