Nothing New
by
Cassie S.
(Age: 15)
copyright 12-16-2007
Age Rating: 10 to 127
I wake up with bright light coming in,
I look out my window and see a bird on a tree limb.
I work my way toward the kitchen to eat,
I find eggs and a pan and begin to beat.
I pick out an outfit and put it on,
I look at the clock, it’s almost dawn.
I should probably find something to do,
But I seem to have lost my other shoe.
I find it under the bed and walk out the door,
Maybe I’ll hang out with Cody, I can’t think of anything more.
I go to Cody’s and watch T.V.
His girlfriend is there and says hi to me.
We sit there being very bored,
After a while I get taken home in his dad’s FORD.
I’m back at home with nothing to do,
My boring life is nothing new.
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It's hard to write about boredom and maybe about the underlying, deeper meanings of things without your readers becoming bored, too. Somehow without a lot of powerful dynamics, and imagery, etc., your story was told very well. I'm not sure I understand why Ford had to be spelled in caps. Maybe to further emphasize the boredom. No insult to anyone, but how more boring can anything be than a plain, old Ford. LOL
You carried us nicely and in a very subtle way through your boring day. *eye roll*
I know where you are comming from. I get like that sometimes if my boyfriend isn't home. I have no friends where in my neighborhood. Its like that almost every weekend though. I can't believe how boring someone's day can go, trust me I know. HaHa I made a ryhme. But I'll comment on another one. Okay hope to hear from you.