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04-30-2010
Emily Valle
This was brilliant!
You took the reader along and made the reader fell like they were the ones there in that situation because we've all had those feelings before.
Watching someone happy and smiling because it is sweet, but being reminded of how lonely we ourselves feel, then those lines of hope. "Someone is dancing with me. But I don't know where." That was great. Someone out there would be perfect, they just have to be found. Great message! Great work!
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08-07-2009
Nivedita Rajan
"Because someone is dancing with me.
But I don't know where."
~ those two lines are brilliant! i can imagine dancing on my own in the snow and then suddenly feel as though someone is dancing with me..it sounded oddly sorrowful but haunting at the same time. i hope i can write as beautifully as you one day!
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05-23-2009
Wayne Thomas
Hi! Coming back to this piece, I find it grows on me. I know very well what it means to be lonely, and what it means to sit on the sidelines, pretending to have a good time when really you're eating your heart out wishing you could be having fum like the others. So simple a piece, yet so profound. Thanks, Wayne
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