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I like this. It's very simple yet very heartfelt. I think it's interesting that the title is followed by a question mark, as remembrance always begins with a question, with some recognition of a shared feeling or event in the past. Without some confirmation of our common experiences, those memories would seem pretty meaningless indeed.
My only suggestion is to perhaps work on the rhythm of the work as a whole. For example, the lines "They're only now part of our past / But these memories are saved, best for last" might sound more fluid if written as "Now they're only part of our past / But the best memories are saved for last." I think if some of the words were re-ordered in this way, the poem would flow much more smoothly.
Your writing has a very true message, we all seem to try to grow up way too fast, instead of living life to its fullest. Cassie, you have such talent and a lot of promise! You are a brilliant writer! Keep writing!
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