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09-13-2009
Akshata Shanbhag
I love poems that say the most with the fewest of lines and yours is one of them.It's so simple and so beautiful.The image is also perfect.Love this one:) - Akshata
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02-04-2008
June Nazarian
Tammy, your poem is so sweet, simple and true. It's always fun to play with words, not only for what they say but also how they appear visually. You have accomplished both in this well constructed piece. Well done.....June
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02-03-2008
Praveen Agnihotri
Simple and beautiful!
Real art tries to keep it simple and effective. On the first read it ended before I could understand and second read just touched me.
Good work, keep it up.
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