Home of: Prose, Poetry & Contests Prose-n-Poetry

Prose-n-Poetry.com

Email Us [e-mail]
Enter our Poetry Contest and Win a Cash Prize !
Welcome !

Please Sign In
MemberID

password
Save Cookie?  
Get lost password

Join Us

Points Reference

NEW! PnP Contests
Member Contests
Contest Winners

Sailor Moon Home
Games

Members
Moonatics
Gold Writers
Silver Writers
Free Members

Galleries
Sailor Moon

Music
Sailor Moon
Christmas
Read !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Columns
Recipes
MoonNotes
Write !
Poetry
Stories
Books
Recipes
MoonNotes
Workshops
Poetry Workshop
Stories Workshop
Books Workshop
Reference
Poetry Help
Stories Help
F.A.Q

Programs
Sailor Moon Episodes
Banners
Resources

On Line
Robert Betts
Megan Quinn
2 Writers

Tyrania Miller
Samantha H.
Tugce Vardar
Basak S.
Natalie Horton
5 Free Members

7 Members
20 Guests

Please Vote
by Walter Jones (Age: 62)
copyright 02-08-2008


Age Rating: 16 to 127

 
Ah I do recall it was heaven sent
A letter with dollars
I had already spent

They took it from me so long ago
I wonder when and if
Any one will know

From what window does light fall
A capture of
Not at all
Traps of haps ah hazard
Lay quiet in
The hall

I saw her and him white on black
They were the epidemic of lock
And that

A restoration of virtue reality
So place your vote
Remembering nothing is free

Trade your markers well
Fell is outside of tell
A child calls
Wonder when
The chance
Will happen again

I watched five hundred nays
A million men
A cry from child
Who is meek
And what is mild

A coffin left in flag draped
Nape of time
In oil
And rake

Do or do not
What answer do you seek
Survival of strongest
Who said we were weak

Primary of the right the left and the gone
Silicate in shadows
I wander along
Hoping and praying
That right turns from wrong

Bible in hand
I seek the place
Where God
Heals the human
Race

Vote your mind and soul
it is free will
God like you own






Author Notes


I never question duty, or responsibility, obligation, as a writer, I report, and cry often at old friends left, once we seemed to be kinder more human lot.
added thought,
BROTHER, CAN YOU SPARE A DIME?
(E. Y. HARBURG/JAY GORNEY) (1932)


Any copyrighted material on these pages is used in "fair use", for the purpose of study, review or critical analysis only, and will be removed at the request of copyright owner(s).


In "Brother, Can You Spare a Dime," Harburg creates an Everyman narrator for his song, a person who has built railroads, skyscrapers,. and tilled the fields. This person has contributed to the vast bounty of the land (through his plow) and kept faith with the promise of the land by bearing guns for it in time of war. There is even a veiled allusion to the mytheme of manifest destiny when the narrator tries to understand how, after he has helped build a dream of "peace and glory ahead," he can now be standing in a breadline. And there is a somewhat ironic allusion to the patriot's mytheme in the lines where he describes the half-million "boots" that went slogging through hell "Full of that Yankee Doodle-de-dum." This last line would remind listeners of the old Revolutionary War song, and also of George M. Cohan's "Yankee Doodle Dandy" and his "Over There." The allusion is veiled enough that Harburg wouldn't necessarily bring down the wrath of the man who once "owned Broadway" but the line serves as a mild indictment of the patriotism that swept us into war but seems not to be reciprocal. Harburg has said of his narrator that he isn't bitter, "He's bewildered. Here is a man who had built his faith and hope in this country. . . . Then came the crash. Now he can't accept the fact that the bubble has burst. He still believes. He still has faith. He just doesn't understand what could have happened to make everything go so wrong" (quoted in 1971, Green 69).
Timothy Scheurer, Born in the USA, Jackson, Mississippi, 1991, pp. 118-119.


Lyrics as recorded by Bing Crosby, 1932, transcribed by Manfred Helfert.
DOWNLOAD AND LISTEN TO SONG (REAL AUDIO FORMAT, 500 KB)
FOR A RELATED/SIMILAR SONG, SEE ALSO "Remember My Forgotten Man"



They used to tell me I was building a dream
And so I followed the mob.
When there was earth to plow or guns to bear,
I was always there, right on the job.
They used to tell me I was building a dream
With peace and glory ahead --
Why should I be standing in line, just waiting for bread?
Once I built a railroad, I made it run,
Made it race against time.
Once I built a railroad, now it's done --
Brother, can you spare a dime?

Once I built a tower, up to the sun,
brick and rivet and lime.
Once I built a tower, now it's done --
Brother, can you spare a dime?

Once in khaki suits, gee, we looked swell
Full of that Yankee Doodle-de-dum.
Half a million boots went slogging through hell,
And I was the kid with the drum.

Say, don't you remember they called me Al,
It was Al all the time.
Why don't you remember, I'm your pal --
Say, buddy, can you spare a dime?

Once in khaki suits, ah, gee, we looked swell
Full of that Yankee Doodle-de-dum.
Half a million boots went slogging through hell,
And I was the kid with the drum.

Say, don't you remember they called me Al,
It was Al all the time.
Why don't you remember, I'm your pal --
Buddy, can you spare a dime?


Spell Check Rhymer Poetry Analyst


Help Us Stop Plagiarism - Nearly all works at PnP are original. However a few people choose to plagiarize. To check, choose a phrase from the work, then either drag and drop to the search box or copy and paste. click on search and works at Google will be shown which match. Just to be sure, please do this before you recommend or rate the work highly...
Google
If you think this work is plagiarized please


Select a Random Work
from Poetry


Comments on this Article/Poem:
Click on the commenter's name to see their Author's Page

02-11-2008 June Nazarian    

Walt - forgot to click the points button, sorry


02-11-2008 June Nazarian    

I really enjoyed this piece although I must admit I had to reread a few times to get the whole gist. I also appreciate the lesson on the lyrics of "Brother Can You Spare Me a Dime." So many give, get little in return, but I wouldn't want to live anywhere else in the world. Thank goodness we have the freedom to vote.
Thanks, Walt..............June


02-08-2008 Mike Gallimore    

Walt, you took me way back with this one. For me the definitive version of "Buddy, Can You Spare a Dime?" was done by Spanky and Our Gang on their '67 album, which I will now be dropping on the turntable this weekend. By far the best female vocal version, for sure. Thanks for reminding me of it, and thanks for another great poem. The message couldn't be more timely.

Three words to remember in the voting booth:
Yes We Can.


Visitor Reads: 64
Total Reads: 75
Comments: 3

Author's Page

Email the Author

Add a Comment




Favorite of:





Send Page to a Friend
Points Reference Privacy
PnP Terms of Service Contact Us
  SEO Software

Visitors
View Stats