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Life
by Megan C.
copyright 02-18-2008


Age Rating: 7 to 127

 
Life
The meaning of
Love
I've fallen in
Time
Is never ending
Hope
All some have left is
Cry
In the night I
Wish
On a star
Death
Lost in the black of
Night
Stars are shining in
Dreams
All I have to hold onto is
Love.

*** Note: Sorry if that was weird. Just experimenting with a new style!***


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05-10-2008 Susan Brown    

I like the way this trickled down, hardly touching the page. Makes my eyes follow (scrolling) as I search for the last line.

I plan to go compare it to the other posts you have placed here, to see, the difference in your usual style. Looking forward to reading more.

Susan
04-16-2008 Alana S.    

omg, don't be sorry!!!! this is great, i was reading it wrong the first time and it didn't make any sense until i got half way through and i realized, so i started again and it as really beautiful.you've done a good job ^.^
03-21-2008 Frank Fields    

Nothing to apologize for. This is very nice work, experimental or not. I don't usually care for very radical experimental works (lazy brain, and all that) but those that end up being coherent and meaningful are well-received. I liked the structure and the deliberate (hopefully) re-reading and pausing which you required of the reader for emphasis and greater meaning.

This was nicely done. ^^

Frank :)


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02-19-2008 Bethany B.    

Hey Meg, this is a pretty good poem, but you know you have friends, not just love. I love the new style by the way. It kind of reminds me of the style I normally write with. Anyway good job. Keep writing your poems.
02-18-2008 Leigh G.    

Interesting new style. I think it could take you places, but you might want to add paragraph spacing and put more information in but try to maintain the flow.

As for the ideas of the poem, it was good. I liked the bit wit wishing on a star. Poems that tell stores are my favorites so I think if you incorporated that a little you'd be doing really well. ^-^ Good work on this!


Leigh
02-18-2008 Cassie S.    

wow....that took some brain to read! ha ha I like it though, that's a cool style. It's like, backwards. ha ha well you did a great job! bye!
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