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09-23-2010
Mae Futter Stein
Hi June,
Was just reading some of your late poetry. This one is quite interesting. A bag lady could have been a dear friend once. Someone gone astray and felt unloved and fell from society. Who knows why or how come she got that way. It was a very well put together topic to write about. I call that one a keeper. Sorry I'm so late reading this one. I liked it very much.
Always, Mae
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04-04-2008
Lauren Turner
It very strange, how you can envy someone who has so little is it not? People don't see how well some others have it, or are too busy to see it. You have a boatload of talent! Keep writing!
I'm off to go read your other poems~!
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03-31-2008
Susan Brown
Toss me in the bag! I'd love to follow this lady around. Possibly hire her to be my eyes as she strolls down all the back alleys my brush loves to paint.
Susan
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03-20-2008
Frank Fields
I understood the message of your writing. I don't think that, beyond that, too much critique is really meaningful. This is the kind of writing that is multi-faceted in its view, its approach, and in its final gift to the reader. It needs more than one reading, which is its own reward, far more than I could offer. ^^
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