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Letting Go
by Angela Toshner (Age: 18)
copyright 02-28-2008


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
One minute your there
One minute your gone.
You praise me
You stab me
You lift me up
You break me.

I yell at the walls until they yell back.
The battles lost.
I hold on till my fingers bleed
Now I’m letting go.

I can’t duck between the whirring blades
You cut me to pieces.
I bleed
I cry
I reach out
You turn the other way
I leave.

I yell at the walls until they yell back.
The battles lost.
I hold on till my fingers bleed
Now I’m letting go.

I gotta leave
Gotta keep on living
Gotta give up on you
Before I give up on me.

I yell at the walls until they crumble.
This battle is won.
I refuse to let my fingers bleed.
I’m getting out
I’m leaving.


I know it isn't the best, but I just wrote whatever was there. I haven't written in so long.


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04-01-2008 Kelly Anne B.    

wow!

I'm lost for words!

Letting go it sounds so easy although we all know its not

Very well written, it nearly made me cry as I'm in that place at the present

no matter how much we get hurt we still try to reach them when all in all we know we just have to let go.

It captures the battle of letting go perfectly
03-31-2008 Susan Brown    

Powerful! Walls crumble at the sound of her voice-bravo-you prevail! This sounds like a positive poem. A giant leap into a future!

Susan
03-11-2008 Samantha P.    

wow this was really good. My only picky is I don't like the word gotta... It is like slang to me so that etched my mind a bit but i slapped myself and concentrated on the meaning.
the ways this poem could be taken in is amazing from loved ones...to family...to abuse or to just verbal yelling.
haha i like how you said i yell at the walls until they yell back.
And its been a while since i have written too but i think you did really good =D
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