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Frank Fields
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A Vampire's Lust
by Frank Fields
copyright 03-25-2008


Age Rating: 13 to 127

  A Vampire's Lust
Picture Credits:

for Takai


Full moon midnight, the moors are still,
A shadow blocks yon ancient moon.
With soft whisper of eerie wing
You feel a dreaded touch behind

Hell's own cold lips press to your neck,
The vampire has you in his clutch.
His clawed hands are cold, breath like ice,
Ancient blood lust is upon him,

Evil, glowing eyes, monster red,
Caught fast, he holds you hungry tight
Lips part on alabaster neck,
Tongue explores your wildly beating,

Pulsing vein, breathing--ragged gasps.
Sudden pressure, hurts fiercely sharp,
His sinking needle fangs drive deep,
Deep to your holy soul, life's vein.

Your soul surrenders unto him,
Cape of black and red circles both,
Moaning, his Ecstasy is yours.
Your life's blood, thick and rich, pumps red,

Shares burning passion, evil dread.
Until, at last, he picks you up,
Unconscious now, full spent of blood,
Bereft of Holy love and soul.

He lays you in your maiden's bed,
Awaits your Awakening Made
Become night's creature and as him--
Partnered love to his reign of souls


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05-02-2008 Leigh G.    

Very nice! I've never thought much of vampires because they're often portrayed as stereotypical, but despite all that I still found you piece enjoyable. The descriptions were excellent and the choice of words flowed very nicely. Good work on this one!


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03-29-2008 Wayne Thomas    

In a word, Terrific! It actually made the hair of my neck stand up. This is a mega piece of work, one of your finest. And the expertly chosen photo only adds to an excellent piece. The tension brings a cold sweat. And the ending, where she becomes his mate, is just fabulous. Keep it up!
Wayne
03-27-2008 Walter Jones    

A line upon a verse, a trust left, write in verb, hear past sound, reach for a swallow immortality, a lover forever of the passion, to give all known life, steal from the bed of roses, evil past blood spilled, skilled write.. Walt
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