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07-07-2010
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
This poem was very, very beautiful. The descriptions were were excellently written and very intriguing. It flowed very well and told an interesting story. Good work!
~Leigh of the Commenting Community
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10-25-2008
Diana Johnson
i'm hiding under my covers. very inventive and intuitive write. death is life's biggest mystery and it is explored differently by everyone.
i like you exporation and take very much.
thanks so much. yours, diana
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05-12-2008
Jade Luke
There's nothing I can say that wasn't said in the poem itself.
No words as beautiful as yours,
And no feelings as strong.
For me to make you feel the honor and love for this poem
I'd have to be you.
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05-09-2008
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
This was worth coming back to. I loved your choices of words. This paints such a wonderful picture of life and death. The imagery is superb. Great job, Anthony
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04-16-2008
Deborah Thomas
Welcome to PNP!
A wonderful true-to-life (and death) piece. Colorful imagery, thought provoking. Something so familiar about the whole experience. A morbid amusement stirs within me concerning Aunt Katheryn being the last turned in. Unexpected word choice, but so obvious the description... reflects an insight learned by experience and need. Calming.
This is my favorite literary genre, and I see that your other titles are similar. Looking forward to reading it all.
Debbie
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04-03-2008
Frank Fields
I like this one very much. ^^ Not because it deals with some of the mysteries of death, but more for the fresh and new way these are presented. At once sad, then glad, then sad again, all ending with enough to have it ended but enough left over for dessert. Beautiful imagery, sounds and colors, rhythm, meter, all technically superior. One of my favorite words--texture--is here in abundance. Delightful. Thank you. ^^
Frank :)
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