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Ember Lights The Night
by Walter Jones (Age: 62)
copyright 04-01-2008


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
Evergreen

dries

fire

of

fire

flies



Sparrow takes a drink from my hand

Whispers of need left on cold trust



Pretty Little

butterfly

turns

to

dust







Lust for life is pure

Rebel cries for help

Mind rests in vision

Off in distance needed





She placed her hand in mine

For a time we walked

Out of the past

To remember

Merry go round

Faith in-bounds





I read her note

On a picture

"Mirror of my soul

I love you for ever

now, you

must

go"





So we play among truth cast aside

Lovers in tired eyes

Sliver of things said

Bring and ring upon

Round stones

Polished by love

Water falls

In pools

Eyes cry

Deep





Watch waves break

Toes cool in wake

Drink twists hope

Words fade to sand

Wasted in lonely

Truth is kept

We sleep

Regret or truth

Hid for another time


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07-07-2008 Brooke M.    

I can't tell you how much I loved this! It was visually stunning and so deep and painful...it was beautiful. I love how you painted such brilliant images...for some reason, i especially like the "butterflies turn to dust" maybe becuase it sounds so unique and different.

The way you portrayed lost love...was so sad and touching. So different and painfilled....a write deserving of 5 stars!!!
04-02-2008 Samantha P.    

This poem was really deep and it seemed so sad. telling someone you love them forever and then telling them they must go...how difficult.
I love your description to love maybe just because I love waterfalls but this was very deep to me and it just gave me a different perspective on many things.
The flow was beautiful and I love how you made it a line kind of reminds me that love is a long bridge that we must cross
-Samantha
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