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04-15-2008
Richard Reed Jr
BBBrrrrr, very chilly story. turns the blood in my veins to ice, and How well you wrote it with such powerful images. It was almost like watching a movie. Rhymes were good, rhythm good.
Edgar Allen Poe is still among us!
Great job,
Rich
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04-10-2008
Frank Fields
This is what a master will do to you, if you aren't careful. Spin the words, to tell the tale of sorrow, love and hate. And in the end, your mind twists 'round, and feels small pity if any at all, for the innocent killed.
"Tis murder," the jury cried. Your mind answers, "justified!"
It is good I think that writers with such skills and talents, are found on our side.
Frank :)
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