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If a connection is made between Williams' opening and closing stanzas being supported by the conflict of the enclosed material, to your opening and closing stanzas as having the same relative value, then the enclosed and supporting material also obtains meaning.
Yours, however, paints a much more grisly rationale for human behavior. Perhaps.
What I did find interesting was that aside from the imagery and development, your offering almost requires the reader to maintain concentration on two levels to achieve maximum emotional impact: the image of the person in the river and the image of the true hedonist who couldn't be delayed.
One author takes another in concept and creates touch of class, so well written and crafted, you captured the moment and the intent, this was precious, a true joy to read.. Walt