07-11-2011
Jade Luke
Visitor Reads: 329
Total Reads: 400
Comments: 17
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01-05-2011
Jade Luke
Visitor Reads: 234
Total Reads: 305
Comments: 16
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04-28-2010
Jade Luke
Visitor Reads: 131
Total Reads: 200
Comments: 15
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12-19-2009
Rodger Moyer
Hi Jade, This is a wonderful poem expressing what poets try to convey in words. Yes it's feelings from words and word combinations. I really liked your poem and look forward to reading more of your work.
Regards, Rodger
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11-25-2009
Frank Fields
Visitor Reads: 63
Total Reads: 120
Comments: 13
Those are really impressive. Usually the visitor reads outweigh the member reads. I think.
Just came back to take a look, and see if things still looked the same. They don't. Or maybe it's my perspective, a year later. I think I've been changed by PnP quite a bit, really. For the better, I hope.
And it's works like this one, that seem so simple, but in reality, if considered properly, contain the major truth of what we are all about, here.
Thank you for YOUR talent and YOUR wisdom. Truly. ^_^
Frank :)
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11-11-2009
Mae Futter Stein
Very nice start of a wonderful poem. One must feel as you say and be able to write what they feel. You definitely are on the right track. I know you can write more as your talent shows in the four lines you wrote. I will be waiting to hear more. I sure you have lots of things inside just waiting to come out. Great poem.
Mae
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10-23-2009
Jade Luke
Visitor Reads: 46
Total Reads: 100
Comments: 11
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10-18-2009
Leigh Gilholm Fisher
This was a cute little poem! For only working with four lines, you conveyed a lot in them. The simple definition of poetry yet profound ending note made t his a good composition. The rhyme scheme was a nice touch, too.
Good work, keep writing!
Leigh
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09-16-2009
Cynthia Baello
How definitely true and honest, poems are about feelings and some words "feel" different to others
as those whoe read poems feel differently. I like the presentation you made, not mushy, just plain frankness.
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09-11-2009
Mae Futter Stein
Jade,
To feel and to be able to put it to words. We mostly all think on subjects that we have done, been, or are in process of doing at one time or the other. To be able to put it all in words to make it beautiful like a melody in a song with words and feeling are the true art of talent.
I feel you are on the right train to that station. Best of luck. Mae
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09-10-2009
Alan Reed
Yes, my dear. Right on. You hit me -- as I am now studying using both sides of the brain. You must have good faculty of both to be a good reader and one overpowers the other a bit to be a great writer. You gotta feel. At least that is what my limited research and life tells me. Bravo. Keep it up! Warm regards, -Alan
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09-09-2009
June Nazarian
Jade, how true it is. To my way of thinking, nothing in life can be fully understood without that "feeling" component. Your poem is pretty, witty, and I felt the message. Very well done....June
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08-29-2009
Wayne Thomas
My philosophy exactly. If there's no "feel", no matter what elsee there may be, it somehow falls short of being a poem. Some people always want a piece to be longer. I disagreee in this case. It stands up, says it's hard-hitting piece, then sits down. Perfect. And I'm just the kind of guy to ask you to read a few of my poems and see if they have the "feel". Thanks for a great little piece.
Wayne
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08-18-2009
Samantha Powers
haha that pretty much sums it up. what is sad is most of the comments are longer then it lol.
It is very true hmmm i dunno tho its almost like a quote yet it could be a very short childrens story.. jk lol
i really really like it but it could use maybe just one or to more lines I just felt like a little something was missing..but then again i guess poetry is supposed to be a mystery then huh?
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