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05-20-2008
Anthony Lane Stahlhut
Everyone always says that loss is hard...duh! I just have another thought though, after the first thoughts of sorrow we should always remember that they will always be with us in our minds. If you believe in the hereafter...they will be with you again. This poem was very nice and kept my attention all the while and I was moved by the story! Great Job, Anthony
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05-20-2008
Richard Reed Jr
Though your subject is sad, the light touches you gave it made it truly a celebration of life.
Some good subtle metaphors, and good images along the way made it a sorrowful joy to read.
Sorry for your loss, thanks for sharing,
Rich
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05-19-2008
June Nazarian
Another wonderful poem, Susan. It's so difficult to lose a loved one, yet we continue along our path while always keeping their memory in mind and heart. I know this from experience. You have certainly captured the sentiment, thanks.............June
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